Ffs. well, got rid of the melody because it was grating the tits off me and then added a newer bassline which i thought gave it a bit more drive. now after a considerable amount of vodka i've given up for the day http://soundcloud.com/mistak/bassedits this production lark isnt easy like
It's got some good sounds in there, finish it off and keep it up and the bassline will follow. There is a reason why you can't nail down a perfect bassline yet! Sounds better than most peoples at this stage though.
