'The Old wooden ship clique - the futura' 1st tune finished (feedback?) http://soundcloud.com/sixpointsix - first tune ive actually managed to finish
I like that mate, its spot on for the first track you have finished. The only feedback would be to give it more of a break, by taking some of the percussion out and then building it back up before it comes back in. Thats purely personal taste though would be the only comment that i would make as would give it more impact when it comes back in after the break and would break up the repetitiveness of some of the percussion. I like the way it builds for the first 3 mins or so, when the bass comes in and then the riff. Some really nice elements to it, impressive stuff for your first attempt. Thumbs up from me.
cheers for the feedback Might come back to it and have abit of a muck on with some more automation on my synths to make it less repetitive.